As Cindy looked out of the castle she knew what she needed to do.
She would go and return her heart to the only boy that was ever true.
Although Billy hadn’t a dollar to his name.
She jumped on one of the maids bicycles and rode off in the rain.
When she got to Billy’s he was so happy that she no longer felt afraid.
Billy the poor beggar boy would be the next king after that day.
The Royal Family would have to accept him now, there was no other way.
They ran off and eloped that very day.
Good tale! I enjoyed it a lot. And, love the picture of the cutie on the title page. He’s adorable. Thank you so much! Nan 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Great story! The old switcheroo.
Thanks 🙂
Great stuff and it should be put to some early sixties rock tune.
LOL 🙂 Yeah I can hear it in my head 🙂
Sarah, Enjoyable romantic story with a great happy ending. Well written. I agree that the little guy at the top of your page is adorable. 🙂 —Susan
🙂 🙂 🙂 thanks
And they all lived happily ever after! 🙂
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Like to peas in a pod.. cute one..
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I enjoyed your story, and the hope for these kids. I’m not good at poetry, but if I could offer a tiny concrit, it would be to look at avoiding the repetition of “day” in the last three lines. Just a thought.
While I’m here, let me stop to applaud the subtitle of your blog – if you find away to achieve the Good wife / mother / self balance, do please send me some tips!
I’m trying 🙂 I’ll let you know if I figure it out LOL 🙂
Dear Sarah,
Sweet story. Always good to return to your first love.
BTW It’s okay and preferred that you paste the photo prompt into your blog for the story. I think I’ve confused some with the copyright messages. The copyright applies to any use other than Friday Fictioneers. If this is not the issue, disregard.
At any rate, I enjoyed your story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
ok 🙂 will do from this week on 🙂